Our pitch was successful as we were able to present our ideas regarding our opening of our teen film clearly. We received some positive feedback from our audience for example :
- They were intrigued by our unique psychological thriller element and idea
- They liked our storyboard and the way we presented ( a video with music in the background )
- We were also complimented on the way in which we presented our pitch (the use of Prezi)
Constructive Dream
Our initial idea was to leave our audience in a state of confusion after watching the beginning of our film. Our audience argued that our storyline would be too confusing to understand, therefore we had to adjust our storyline in order to make it clear to the audience. For example, we came to a conclusion that we should show that the unusual spooky events that occur to Marcus happens it a dream and then follows to reality.
Another change we advised to make was to ditch a location that was included in our teen film, this was the park. The audience stated that it has no relation to our storyline so we decided not to use an isolated park. Another reason why we decided not to use a park is because we want to create a "no escape" effect where Marcus is locked in the school so it wouldn't make any sense for us to film in the park.
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